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Post by Vintage on Thu Jan 03, 2008 5:38 pm

Written yesterday. Feedback is appreciated.

Emphasized
I wonder how long you will continue to step on me like the ground beneath your feet.
I'm standing in front of you offering to give you all of me
and yet all you seem to want is my intimacy.
With every muscle in my body, I'm fighting back hard.
I'm verballing giving you blows to the head.
So maybe then you'll hear me
Since the only blows to the head you want to feel involves my mouth on your penis.
I refuse to give up though.
I plan on getting what I want and that is you.
I'm calling out your name
and all you seem to hear is, "Daddy please don't stop."
When all I'm trying to do is get to know you and how you were made.
Every promise you have made has been inconsistent to what you have done.
So every lie you give me,
I take because a part of me is elated that at least you gave me something.
Every word is celebrated and elevated inside of my head
because a part of me feels you want me.
But the way I want you to want me is not the same.
You want me open and willing.
Just like how you open your arms to embrace me,
You want me to easily open my legs the same way and embrace you.
You want me blind folded to the truth and unable to see the real you.
You want me handcuffed to your bed,
Always ready whenever you want me.
When all I want is to be handcuffed to your heart.
When the blind fold comes off all I want to see is the beautiful side of you.
Not the abusive one.

But as time passes, I slowly start to become reluctant.
My vocal muscles become sore from the fight and I relax.
I stop calling your name and sometimes I can't even bear to whisper it.
Your inconsistent promises and frequent lies
become words I've heard constantly in repetition.
Truth only lies in your action which never happens
and my reaction is numbness.
I no longer take what you give
and your words are no longer celebrated,
They just don't faze me.
I've stopped standing in front of you offering all of me.
I walk ahead hoping that just maybe one day
You'll take your place beside me.
And if you don't,
then maybe you fell in between some legs that opened easier than mine.[b]

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Post by Brooke.Ashley on Thu Jan 03, 2008 6:26 pm

Love it.
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Post by Niqueslover on Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:35 pm

Me gusta. I write poetry too! doubt I'll post any on here though

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